Friday, August 28, 2009

poem:Halo

I am free tonight
Crazy by the moonlight
Do you want to come
Come out and play

Shining lights around
Twenty feet off the ground
Do you want to see
And slowly fly away

I don't wanna live here anymore
Don't want nothing to care for

The velvet clouds envelop
New feelings develop
A light shines inside of me
And I see your halo

2 comments:

  1. Romantic! I mean it both in earnest and in literariness ! Never knew you hid a poet in there:)

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  2. Lovely poem :) I like this stanza the best:
    Shining lights around
    Twenty feet off the ground
    Do you want to see
    And slowly fly away
    Expresses the feeling of being liberated very well (my interpretation).

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